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Dec 21, 2021 at 12:48
In the current translation, the "please" has not been translated. Also, the "خود" word has been used twice in this short sentence that is not appropriate.
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گذرواژه خود را جهتبرای دسترسی به دادههای شخصی خود وارد کنید.
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Dec 22, 2021 at 16:49
I just made two small modifications on the main translation:
- instead of "جهت", I suggest "برای". It is not only the correct translation for "for", but also what people use normally in conversations.
- I removed the second "خود" in the sentence, because it can still transfer the meaning we want and the sentence is even more beautiful to ears (or eyes) without the repetitive word.
- instead of "جهت", I suggest "برای". It is not only the correct translation for "for", but also what people use normally in conversations.
- I removed the second "خود" in the sentence, because it can still transfer the meaning we want and the sentence is even more beautiful to ears (or eyes) without the repetitive word.
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