The verb “entrou” needs to be accompanied by a subject, like “você” (“you”). Since this is not the case, the word “entrada” fits better, because it doesn’t need a complement.

“Login” is a word widely used in Portuguese, specially when related to apps. The word was maintained, as it makes more sense in the sentence than “entrou” (word that is being used in the applied translation). The article “um” was removed to reduce the number of characters (while keeping the same meaning).

"Local" would imply a broader place than "localização" in terms of a specific region, state or city.