ReminderCheckPhoneNumberDescription
Keep your number up to date to ensure you can always log into Telegram.
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Чтобы Ввы всегда могли завойти в Telegram, важно указатьобязательно указывайте актуальный номер телефона.
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Dec 21, 2021 at 09:41
In the applied translation above, the verb «зайти» appears stylistically incongruent and just a tad too colloquial for the given context. «Войти» is more stylistically neutral and fits much better. In the second part of the sentence, I opted to switch to the imperative mood to give the instruction a bit more sense of urgency (a purely subjective stylistic choice on my part).
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Dec 21, 2021 at 10:03
changed the word order as it sounded more light-weight and natural to me
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