The important point in this sentence is the correct translation based on Farsi grammar rules which do not appear strange or foreign to a Farsi native speaker. The English grammar is the correct order of " subject", "verb" and "object" . In above sentence, the "subject' is not clear and we have a "passive tone" , therefore , the Farsi suggested translation should present a "passive tone" as well.

In the applied translation "زمان واقعی" is not an existing and comprehensible phrase in Persian, as if there is also an "Unreal time". Here the word "real" is used in the sense "the actual time during which a process or event occurs" so a more accurate and intuitive translation would be "همان" or "the same" so the original English phrase could be: "Updated at the same time as you move". Also "بی‌درنگ" or "بی‌وقفه" are other possible alternatives. Finally "as" should not always be translated to "در هنگام" and could be concisely replaced with "با" resulting in a shorter however fully meaningful translation.