The applied translation has many issues; Since Persian syntactic structure is Subject+Object+Verb, Contracted as SOV, It was better to transfer verbs to the end of clauses, So I personally tried to change it to make it more understandable for Persian Community. As the applied one is a bit mixed together, It's better to change the verbs and its part of speech. It seems more natural to Persian native speakers ears and is easier to follow as well. For example, " قادر به بازگشت نخواهید بود' is way better than "قادر نخواهید بود به بازگشت". Cause It doesn't feel good when you read it. Simply we can change the place of verb to make it better. Reader would have better feeling when reading the text.